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the location of the doors as part of tha base is important, the folded plate of the steps: hiding the steps and ending in a point is important, the community space revealing itself as a glass box on top is imporatnt; consider the horizontal lines to go all the way through- are they louvers? can be;
on the technical side you have an issue if the beam over hangs; it is a thermal break issue which only means you have to makethe cantilever an added piece to the whols system, I will say more when i post remarks to your section.