...does not include Prof Cody's comments:
1. Kevin: detail model - end?, it can use a base as part of end.
2. Giuseppe- include site analysis! on all levels discussed
3. Jesse- complete description of structure as a whole as discussed
4. Greg- material/ light phenomenology of corner? where can this be pointed out on board
5. Lewis- complete exploded 3d and improve its light weight, also make a site reference to all diagrams as discussed
6. Robert- the frame was not in the models, why?, say something about interior shadows of the green; materiality between outside and inside, etc.
7. Jamie- draw structure plan in relation to 3d, draw project elements or idea as a kit of parts, i.e. window types, skylight type.
8. Josh- complete models, make an unfolded structure drawing like Tariq to speak of equilibrium of project
9. Ozi- complete model and show form work grid information on board
10. Tariq- complete model requirements
11. Dominick- stand back and compare your presentation with the rest and see what you are missing.
12.Eric- complete models, include overall section
13. Sal- complete model- overall picture
14. Nathan- concrete detailing, describe
I will provide grades after seeing how you address these comments next class..
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